Re: HERO IMPERFECT 5

Thank you, S&C, for your critiques and comments :) They were much appreciated. I wish more people would give me details like this. Thank you for being such an avid reader of my stories

I will strive to honor all of your requests. I'm actually not a good comedy writer which is why I tend to keep humor to a minimum in my stories...I simply do not write it well. But since Ultra Girl has a good sense of humor, and is quite witty, I realize that I may have made the fifth chapter a bit dry with all of that serious talk bereft of any witty banter. I will work on that for the sixth chapter.

As for Solar Man being concerned about harming Ultra Girl in a sexual situation...I'm not able to go into this in any kind of detail. It's against the rules so I have to leave it up to the imagination, for the most part, regarding how far the two of them have gone sexually (other than simple stuff like kissing, holding hands, and cuddling on the beach together). However, speaking in hypotheticals, and referring to his sex life with Evelyn, I don't believe that Solar Man is incapable of having sex with a normal human woman...there is no reason to believe that he would damage his partner as long as he maintained enough control. I think he is VERY concerned about this and takes every precaution to be gentle with his partners. If Superman and Lois Lane can have a sex life, then so can Solar Man and his various non-superhumanly strong partners. This is a good topic of discussion and if you want to discuss it further here, I'm game. However, since you think this is important I will get into Solar Man's sex life with women in his age group in the past, including Evelyn, in a future story while staying within the rules. I will make it clear that he is quite concerned about this and how he has managed to keep his sex partners safe despite his incredible level of superhuman strength.

Btw, I have seen "My Father the Hero" and I have it on DVD. Awesome flick and Katherine Heigl was incredibly beautiful when she was 14. She is still really beautiful now and I am still a big fan of hers, but she was truly a goddess as a young teen. She had a pretty face and an incredible body, and she looked amazing in a bikini. Moreover, Gerard Depardieu was funny as her beleaguered father who had to deal with her hilarious lies. I heartily recommend that movie to all hebes.

I look forward to any other critiques or comments you may have...thank you again for reading and for taking the time to offer me constructive commentary :)