Re: The Importance of Truth (major essay from me)

Very clear logic and good exposition, Dissident.

Fankoo, my friend, and thank you for reading.

If I may be so bold, I would suggest trying to make your sentences shorter, and having more paragraphs (i.e. for Newgon).

Thank you for the constructive criticism. I do have a habit of making my sentences too long, and I will work on that. I will re-read my essay before submitting it to Newgon and I will strive to correct this problem of mine wherever I see it. I do try my best to separate my points into different paragraphs as often as possible, though I understand that I still end up with some overly long tracts of text that may turn off some readers, so I know I need to work on this more, too.