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very nice ...

Posted by Baldur on 2011-October-25 10:52:16 EDT, Tuesday
In reply to To Face the Sunrise (short story) posted by Markaba on 2011-October-25 07:11:19 EDT, Tuesday
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Well done, Markaba.

Good imagery, inventive use of future slang (perhaps a trifle overdone), and the sequencing of events was mostly good (though it seemed a little disjointed where the protagonist first met the old man).



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