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Well Written!

Posted by 28 on 2002-July-17 11:28:44 EDT, Wednesday
In reply to my first GM posted by golem on 2002-July-17 02:59:14 EDT, Wednesday
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Hi golem,

To me, a story is well written if the reader sees vivid, visual images in his mind while reading it. I could actually see, in my mind's eye, little Amber, in her purple two piece bathing suit, giggling as you showed her the "nutcracker" - LOL.

In fact, I could see the whole picture as I read what you wrote. Thank you for sharing your GM. I'm envious! You did a nice job telling the story.

28

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