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Re: B4U-ACT 2012 Workshop (Summary + Review)

Posted by remo on 2012-May-20 17:45:27 EDT, Sunday
In reply to B4U-ACT 2012 Workshop (Summary + Review) posted by sproutinghalo on 2012-May-18 09:36:36 EDT, Friday

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That summary was extremely well written. I'd suggest introducing it with a synopsis - one sentence to all major points, clear and easy to read, with much less density. What you wrote is highly technical and conveys a large amount of information - and is difficult to follow unless you read slowly, carefully, and with patience. That is not the need for most people in your audience.

I very much support the efforts of B4U-ACT. Congratulations on a successful seminar.


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